Little one playing, on the shallow stream
Just having fun, Just being a kid
Fun is more dangerous, than it might seem
Mother is watching, as it happens quick
Little one slips, the water turns red
She finally has reason, to slit her wrist
From a mother's love, they're together again















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I'll wait until school to see it...
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You know the way you approached writing this and the way you went about was great. It was like watching the Saw Trilogy and the suprises at the end, AWE THE FUCK SOME (awesome)
They are exploring using one mood...
But I used two... starting off happy but ending in sadness
No quite sure if it is appropriate for school
I asked a few other teachers and they say it is border-line
They can't even attack my mind either because I'm not depressed
I'll just point out Edgar Allen Poe's work
lmao
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To read a newspaper is to refrain from reading something worth while. The first discipline of education must therefore be to refuse resolutely to feed the mind with canned chatter. - Aleister Crowley
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Update: March 22, 2009: You can send your contact details to !Morologus-Es if you wish.
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Dove sono i bei momenti, di dolcezza e di piacer? (Where have they gone, those sweet moments of pleasure?)
Despite my attempts in not making it too graphic...
The school wanted to see a psychologist after I handed this is
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To read a newspaper is to refrain from reading something worth while. The first discipline of education must therefore be to refuse resolutely to feed the mind with canned chatter. - Aleister Crowley
lol
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To read a newspaper is to refrain from reading something worth while. The first discipline of education must therefore be to refuse resolutely to feed the mind with canned chatter. - Aleister Crowley
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